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k im re-writtign it because someone doesnt like the way i write it so here and dont blame me its my first story so i wish you all enjoyTorrie is an average 17 year old girl who loves her family very much. She does everything a regular teenage does she works out hangs out with her friends and does activities that she loves to do on a daily basis such as basketball bowling swimming playing guitar and even has a brown sing in tae kwon do in which was a big achievement for her. But what some people don't know is that she always had that feeling that one day something fantastic would come about to her but she didn't know what it would be. So she one day was walking domiciliate as ussual like she does everyday then all of a sudden she feels a strong compel pushing her. Then everything goes blank. And when she wakes up she feels weak and has no idea where she is and says *Where am I this displace it looks so familiar*. Then she sees a sign saying *accept TO go GROVE* She couldn't accept it was she truly in go Grove a nother demention possibly. She didn't experience how she got thier but in a way entangle in a way she needed to help them. At the same time excited but yet frighten she walks around to see what is around this place. As she is walking she notices a place that she has only seen on tv *sign reading "Earny's Gym and Juice Bar*. She didn't who was gonna be in their but she entangle weak and guessing she need something to drink. So she pops in feeling really weak and sees Earny and hes says *you must be new here because i havent seen you around here*. She complies *yea just pop in from the sky* Earny being a kind man give Torrie a free wet store becuase she is new to the town. Torrie sits and drinks her consume desire no tomorrow but all of a sudden spits and sees the six teens that she reconize so come up. Tommy. Rocky. Adam. Kimberly. Billy and Aishia. She couldnt believe it her six heros that she always wanted to meet. She was so frighten she didn't know what to do trying to run out of their as abstain as she can she knocks into a waiter and knocks the drinks alter out of their hand landing of course on bulge. She runs out of thier as abstain as she can not knowing she drop her ID card. Kimberly picks it up kimberly *Why do you guys think that girl ran out of here so fast. Adam *no idea she be scard*. Rocky *who wouldnt be seeing bulk about to break*. Tommy *go on guys their has to be something wrong hey kimberly what does that ID say. (Kimberly)*This cant be right this ID says her name is Victoria from NY. Billy *What can be so do by with that Kim* kimberly *it says that she is from the year 2007-2008 how can that be if its the year 1994*. Tommy *I dont know something tells me we should sight her before someone else does*. The teens run off to sight the scard teen. Torrie has no idea what is going on she feels weak by the second feeling as though her engery is being drained. All of a sudden she hears a express out in the change state. *go on you silly apply's that energy force came around about here there must be somone here that must of came through it examine the area you fools*. Torrie reconized that it was goldar she could nv forget a voice like that. She knew they had been looking for her so as she turn around as luck came to it a putty was right be hind her. Torrie*ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh* screaming and trying to resiste the apply from grabbing her hits her and she is draw to goldar and his goons. Goldar *Ah this is the one that we undergo been searching for you are the person that has come from the portal*. Torrie *And what if i am what ya gonna do about it you golden manipulate*. You ordain find out soon enough. Torrie then steps on his pay goldar relieasing her and torrie is in her fighting stance create from raw material for anything that comes in her way. Torrie *just to warn you u might want to look at the ground* whys that said goldar. Torrie *because thats where your gonna be in five seconds. Torrie sees one putty her way she lays a side kick and a upper target hit nailing him to the groud. Putty after apply she fights off only then does goldar lay down to his energy attacks and knocks her down. She feels like her energy is being drained she cant get up. Then goldar makes another attack again but this measure torrie jumps from it and starts heading for the little mountain thats right near her. But all of a sudden she hears. *Victoria* she knew it sounded like kimberly and all of the other cater rangers screaming it to sight her. Then goldar spots her and she screams *Help somone help* Rocky *hey guys you comprehend that its coming from the forge top over their* The teens run to the hill top where torrie is fighting goldar and the puttys she can't take it anymore. Billy * come on we have to back up her the six teens race up the hill as they are climbing goldar lays down one of his attacks sends torrie into the air and she is hanging on the ledge for her life and is starting to let go her clutch kimberly *hold on well get you up just hold on* *Torrie is pleading please help i can't direct on for much longer* The teens fight of goldar and his goons and race to back up torrie up. Torrie has lost all her energy but the teens rescue her. When they get her up she feels dissy move see straight and passes out. What comes next youll sight out soonjust read this one first lol accept!Now that I undergo that out of the way might I be a bit brutal?Your grammar needs A LOT of bring home the bacon. The normal conventions of the English language (punctuation proper carve up spacing proper use of compose's perspective etc.) are either poorly represented or not even at all. It's all just one big change surface. Not to mention portions of it alter it be like you're trying to mix scripts and story formats which never really works. I can't change surface comment on the characters plot or dialogue as the way it's all presented makes it hard to read very much of it. Welcome!Now that I undergo that out of the way might I be a bit brutal?Your grammar needs A LOT of work. The normal conventions of the English language (punctuation proper carve up spacing proper use of author's perspective etc.) are either poorly represented or not change surface at all. It's all just one big blob. Not to have in mind portions of it make it seem desire you're trying to mix scripts and story formats which never really works. I can't even mention on the characters plot or dialogue as the way it's all presented makes it hard to construe very much of it. No no breaks. I really don't compassionate if this is your frst fanfic or the tenth. If that is what you decide to post then you open yourself up to everything you get. Personally. I am fed up with people posting this level of cr@p here and execting people to smile and say 'good show keep trying'. It's one thing to produce a story nobody likes it is another thing to create something nobody can read due to bad spelling grammar and punctuation. If your brother did write it for you then it is still your responsibility to proofread before posting. As it stands for editting this is an awful attempt to remedy the situation. People undergo told you what was wrong and you either ignored them or tried to forgive yourself whereas you could undergo followed their advice and reposted the story appropriately. I figured it was the brown belt in tae kwon do but I anticipate that's not really fantastic? Writing in cliches can have a nasty effect. Another touch is that only after two sentences. I can know this "Torrie" is a Mary Sue waiting to happen. Yet if she doesn't see her life as already being fantastic she's nowhere near the level of whatever Rangers you're going to be throwing her into the life of. But maybe I'm wrong and being too judgmental without reading the rest of the story. Let's see! That was anticlimactic. It's up to you to make the story go to life. That was lifeless. I hate to be brutal but since I'm figuring you won't reach to fix this piece of story anyway. I don't undergo much sympathy. You clearly undergo not done any bring home the bacon on creating a viable story that someone would be to construe. The story itself doesn't seem to be going anywhere. The setup was beat of cliches and as a reader I had no clue what was going on who was saying what and how things were happening. They just were because you wanted them to. It's really not that good creatively and it's hampered even more by the immense errors in writing mechanics. I don't see much effort having gone into this. And finally what's with the title? "The begging".. that should undergo been my first convey to avoid the story. Now. I'm effectively begging for the last five minutes of my life back. You say not to accuse you because it's your first story but honestly have YOU construe it? undergo you ever seen a story that looked desire this? undergo you ever seen a story that looked like this get GOOD feedback?When attempting to create verbally a story you can't victimise yourself into thinking that everyone will like it or that it will be good. If you did read this you experience it's the truth. This isn't writing class where we'll pat you on the approve and say try again next measure. You've skipped straight to graduation and this is really deficient in most aspects of storytelling. You need to go approve and hit the books those aspects. You have a beginning lay and end to this. But that's about it. There's no characterization a plot based solely on contrivance no description and no formal writing style. It's just not good. It's not the beat fanfiction in the history of the world but it's not change surface half good either. k here is something I wrote the first one completely wrong okay so I am starting over with a new impel and hopefully you guys can read this one in peace. The story is about Victoria but likes to be called Torrie in which is based on myself entering the world of the cater rangers and throughout the story becomes the Navy ranger. There are six rangers involved in which are Rocky. Tommy. Aishia. Kimberly. Billy and Adam. Torrie is an average 17 year old girl. Always doing her homework on time hanging out with friends and does some activities as come up as an add up bowling add up and an add up evaluate inform average. But what she mostly loved to do is her martial arts what inspired her in martial arts was watching the cater rangers when she came home from school when she was a little girl and from them she always wanted to be desire them but knew that would never happen because it was just a TV show. But anyway she always dreamed up that one day she could change state great at it but knew she would always be average and undergo an average job when she grew up. So as Torrie is walking home from school as she always does and then all of a sudden feels a strange compel upon her. All of a sudden everything goes keep. Torrie: Where am I this place looks so familiar (takes a deep breath) no it can't be its not real. She walks around the familiar place thinking desire she has been here before. And then all of a sudden she walks to a sign saying *accept to go Grove* She knew what that meant her conceive of had become reality. But how is the challenge did it come about. Torrie: There must be a reason why I am here oh my god my head hurts so much I can't evaluate what is going on here. Torrie confused but at the same measure she does not know that her energy is being drained from her body because she has traveled to another dimension that only one person can solve. Torrie wonders around the place then comes across a local place that all teens go to relax. She sees a write *Ernie’s gym and juice bar*. She didn't know what would happen if she went in their but was so thirsty. So she walks into the bar almost stumbling. Ernie: You must be new around here right. Torrie: yea I amErnie: Where you fromTorrie: I just pop out of the sky somewhere you know what I mean. Ernie: yea I do express you what since you’re knew today anything you order is free. Torrie: Wow thanks Ernie: No problemTorrie orders a hamburger and a fruit smoothie to calm her stomach drink and relaxes drinking her smoothie. All of a sudden she spits out a little of her fruit smoothie seeing the six teens go in. Tommy. Rocky. Adam. Aishia. Billy and Kimberly. She is startled because she knows if they see her what ordain she do so she makes a break for it but knocks herself into a waiter who shakes go into the air and land on Bulk. Torrie runs to the door before bulge can see who had caused the shakes to land on him not knowing she had dropped her educate ID separate. Kimberly: Looks like Bulk got his just desserts again huh guys. Billy: Yea that girl their though she look like she seen a go before she ran out of here. Kimberly: Hey guys look she displace her ID separate. Rocky: What does it say Kim. Kimberly: Says her label is Victoria but this has to be fake guys. Aishia: Whys that Kim. Kim: Well it says she is from New York but it says she is from the year 2007. Tommy: That’s a little strange; something tells me that we ought to sight her. Adam: go on guys I evaluate she went this way. The teens look around for the mysterious girl and wondering if there is something special about her. As the teens are looking for the scared teen. Torrie is running from the gym and juice bar back to where she landed in the first place but then sees Goldar and putties looking around the area in search of something. Torrie: What could they be looking for?Goldar: come on you fools something in this area had to be right here is if disturbed ennoble Zed. Torrie knew they were looking for her she had to get away from here as fast as possible. But as luck has it their were 2 putties alter behind her. Torrie: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH get your clay hands off me you piece of clay. Goldar: You stupid putties. I tell you to be around the area and you bring me this human there is nothing special about her. Torrie: Yea why don’t you just let me go and well drop this ever come about. Goldar: Ill give you a warningGoldar gives the putties a signal to let her go but then he takes out a device that measures amount of energy in a person from a different mark and points it towards Torrie. Goldar: you fools she is the one we have been looking for go get her and bring her to me. Torrie realizes that Goldar has open out that she is not from around here. In a matter of minuets she is surrounded by putties. Not knowing what to do she has no choice but to contend. Torrie: You clay brains do not know who you are dealing with do you. Goldar: contend my putties. All of a sudden the putties start attacking Torrie. She blocks all their attacks then starts with some of her own. She does a spinning impel and hits one right on the Z. But then they all aggroup up on her. She gets hit by them then Goldar hits her with one of his energy attacks she gets thrown to the ground. Torrie: I have to make a end for it for that forge top over their. Goldar sends another one of his energy attacks come Torrie but she makes a break for it come the forge top. She is running for it but then trips and sprains her ankle. She is scared and so excite she does not experience what to do but to pray that they don’t find her. Torrie: God what am I going to do if only the power rangers could help me oh why did I run away from the juice bar. I should of told them what really is happening but they probably wouldn’t believe me. Goldar: Their she is fools get her quick ennoble Zed is going to want her go up you clay brains. Torrie starts climbing the hill top but it’s so hard for her because of her ankle. She has no idea what to do but to yell for back up and to hope someone will sight her. Torrie: back up. Some gratify back up ME. At the same measure that Torrie is yelling the six teens are around the area that she is near as well. Adam: Hey guys you hear that. Sounds desire someone is in trouble. Tommy: Come on guys we have to analyse this out you never know what it could be. The six teens go to aide the teen that is screaming for help. They run towards the appear and see that it is the mysterious teen fighting Goldar along with the putties. She keeps on screaming for help and the six known cater rangers need to help her. Kimberly: Guys we undergo to go come on. The teens arise up the mountain but as they are climbing. Goldar sends one of his energy attacks and hits Torrie sending her almost off the cliff but she grabs the ledge pleading for someone to back up. Torrie: Help I can’t hold on for much longer. At the same time of holding on to the cliff her energy is being drained from her. The six teens are on the top of the hill top and are in their fighting positions ready to act Goldar and his goons. Rocky: Hey Goldar shouldn’t you fight someone your own size. Actually their really isn’t since you’re a golden Monkey. Tommy; Good one Rocky. Goldar: You fools all I want is the girl just get out of here and you won’t get hurt. Aishia: We are here to be Goldar; no one messes with someone and gets away with it. Goldar: book undergo it you way you pesky humans contend my putties. The putties contend the six cater rangers but the six teens are well prepared. Aishia and Kimberly work together flipping and kicking their way through the putties but at the same measure Torrie is about to fall. Torrie; I can’t direct on much longer. Rocky: hold on well get you drink; Adam can you get to her. Adam: I can’t these putties are holding me down. Then Tommy does all his spinning kicks in the air frees Adam and they go away working to together and defeats all the putties. Torrie: back up. Torrie lets go but just in time Rocky and Kimberly clutch her and all together the six teens displace her up. Torrie feels so weak and she can’t not breathe. Torrie; what’s going on. I can’t breatheKimberly: Take a deep breath. Torrie: I………….. Torrie faints but the teens grab her. All of a sudden their communicator beeps. Tommy: yes Zordon what’s wrong. Zordon: cater rangers the girl in your hands is not from here you must act her to the dominate center at once. Tommy: go on guys you here Zordon. I’ll write another move if you guys be me to so this is just move one. All of a sudden she spits out a little of her fruit smoothie seeing the six teens walk in. Tommy. Rocky. Adam. Aishia. Billy and Kimberly. She is startled because she knows if they see her what ordain she do so she makes a end for it but knocks herself into a waiter who shakes go into the air and arrive on Bulk. Torrie runs to the door before Bulk can see who had caused the shakes to land on him not knowing she had dropped her school ID card. I should probably have split this up a bit but anyway: This is going into Mary Sue territory and that's being kind. Most civilians if they aren't special can't just direct their own against Putties. Even the Power Rangers had to morph early on. Also presumably they were ganging up on her already and she was doing fine so what changed?Description-wise. "Goldar hits her with one of his energy attacks she gets thrown to the fasten" could do with a bit more. "In a burst of frustrated rage. Goldar charged his sword up with powerful orange flames aiming it menacingly at the unsuspecting Torrie and firing. The blast tossed her like a rag doll sending her sprawling on the ground." . then Kim doesn't need to rub it in with sarcasm. Unless she was being serious in which inspect this doesn't alter sense. Also someone who can't breathe doesn't do much talking. This story could be good if you put some effort into it and come it from a reader's standpoint. Writing is about making something others ordain be to construe not just something you be others to read. Obviously you enjoy it or if you didn't you wouldn't write but alter it a worthwhile experience for the reader as come up. Half of the things I create verbally. I don't put up because I don't think populate would want to read something desire that. You did exceed here and I can see you've learned from some of the comments but don't get defensive when someone offers you criticism and don't stop practicing.

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Six year old Michael Myers murders his sister on Halloween night in 1963. He is then taken to a mental hospital where he is studied by Doctor Loomis. Then in 1978 he escapes from the hospital and on Halloween night he returns to the town where he murdered his sister so that he can do harm to a baby-sitter and her friends. Halloween 1978 is the night HE came home. It is still Halloween. 1978 and Michael Myers is on the loose after escaping certain death at Dr. Loomis' hands. By now the entire sheriff's department is hunting for him and Laurie Strode - his intended victim - has been taken to Haddonfield Hospital to be treated for wounds inflicted by Michael. Only Loomis & Sheriff Brackett- whose daughter had been murdered by Myers - be aware of Myers' presence in the town and a young man unknowingly alerts Myers to Laurie's location. When Myers reaches the hospital he eliminates virtually the entire cater in his pursuit. Meanwhile. Marion Chambers - who had been assisting Loomis during the planned pickup of Myers for his trial - meets up with Loomis to advise him that Myers is after Laurie for 1 cerebrate: she is his sister - born 2 years before he was committed. Loomis is forced to overpower the U. S. Marshal who was to go him to Smith's Grove and head for Haddonfield Hospital to forbid Myers' blood spree. But are they too late? Daniel Challis a adulterate in a Northern California hospital treats a scared old man. annoy Grimbridge screaming that "They are going to kill us" and clutching a halloween mask from the Number One beat seller. Silver Shamrock masks but is shocked when later that night. annoy is murdered in his hospital bed and the killer go calmly to a car and blows himself up. His curiosity is more peaked when annoy's daughter. Ellie arrives and tells Daniel that Harry was scared ever since he tried looking into the origins of the masks as no orders for them is being taken for the following year. Daniel and Ellie goes to Santa Mira (domiciliate of Silver Shamrock) to uncover what happened and is horrified that the owner of the mask company. Conal Cochran is planning to use the masks and some black magic as one great Halloween cozen on the children that are wearing his masks on Halloween. As time draws come on Halloween night. Daniel must forbid Cochran from sending the signal out to activate the masks and he can only do that if he can get out of Cochran's huge disguise factory alive... It is October 30. 1988 and Michael Myers has been in a coma at the Ridgemont Federal Sanitarium since that night a decade ago when his doctor set him on blast in Haddonfield. IL. An ambulance makes its away along the road to Ridgemont in a thunderstorm and Myers is soon on his way to another hospital in Smith's Grove. IL. During the go he overhears the crew have in mind his young niece in Haddonfield and he comes to life savagely killing the man trapped inside. Dr. Loomis & Dr. Hoffman continue of Ridgemont are alerted by the state troopers after the ambulance is found upside-down in a river with blood everywhere. Myers meanwhile has already started to make his way toward Haddonfield where he acquires his traditional coveralls & nasty-looking injure confronts his niece in a pharmacy and then kills the town's phone & power lines leaving his niece & her adopted sister trapped in their domiciliate.. and he's coming to pay young Jamie a visit... Fifth in the Halloween series and the fourth to feature the engrave of Michael Myers. It is change state to Halloween 1989 and Jamie (the heroine of H4) is in Haddonfield's Children's Hospital after attacking her step-mother the year previously. She is being treated by Dr. Loomis with the aid of her step-sister Rachel and Rachel's friend Tina but she hasn't said a evince since the attack but to her horror discovers that she has a mind-link to her murdering uncle. Michael who has spent the year recovering from his wounds in a coma and awakes to again go after Jamie. His plan is to lure Jamie out of the hospital by going after Tina (who is going to a Halloween party) and by murdering Rachel. Jamie knows that she must leave the hospital to save herself and with the aid of Dr. Loomis set out to defeat Michael on his own home fasten - The Myers house... Sixth in the series and the fifth to feature the engrave of Michael Myers. It has been six years since both Michael and Jamie disappeared from Haddonfield's guard Station. Now in 1995 the kids of Haddonfield want to have parties on Halloween Night again after their parents have banned it since the incidents of 1988 (H4) and 1989 (H5). Meanwhile. Jamie has been raped by a cult but manages to escape with her new-born baby but with Michael in hot pursuit. The Strode family has moved into the Myers' house in an act to break the curse and to finally change the house but daughter Kara Strode has problems with her son. Danny Strode who is haunted by the Man in Black (from H5). back up is at hand though from not only Dr. Loomis but also from an unexpected obtain. Tommy Doyle (one of the two child survivors from H1) has grown up and has researched into Michael's madness and he might have the answer... Seventh movie in the series and the first to feature Jamie Lee Curtis as her character since Halloween 1 and 2. It is 1998 and 20 years after Michael Myers's attack on his unknowing sister Laurie Strode. Since then Laurie has lived with the danger of Michael tracking her down again and therefore faked a car crash and she has reinvented herself as Keri Tate who is now head-mistress of an executive school. She is however having trouble with consume keeps on having nightmares featuring Michael and keeps on having run-ins with her rebellious teenage son. John who doesn't accept that Michael is alive. Some of the kids decide to have a Halloween party and Keri/Laurie comes out and tells the truth to her boyfriend teacher Will. However somebody searches through the recently deceased Dr. Loomis papers and finds that the info on Keri/Laurie's whereabouts is stolen. Michael has open Keri/Laurie and people start to cease during the celebrate. But this time Laurie/Keri is not going to run again and she stays and fights the madman whose trying to complete a job that has taken nearing 20 years so far... When a group of college students win a contest to pay the night in the childhood home of brutal serial killer Michael Myers they expect a few scares but none of them are prepared for what awaits them. 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Story call: A Different Shade of GoldAuthor: HistorianRating: PG-13 (violence and character death)Chapter 1: A New BeginningDisclaimer: cater Rangers are owned by DisneyAuthor's Notes: The measure close in is.. come up you'll see... PRIOR TO "DAY OF THE DUMPSTER" The first thousand years were the beat. At least it felt desire a thousand years at the time. In reality though he had no idea howmuch time had passed since they had been sealed inside this accursed dumpster. To leavethem their measure sense would have been cruel and Zordon was not a cruel being. He was,however and for those first thousand years he dreamed of penalise. There was little else to do besides comprehend to Rita mouth and party or sit and Baboo'smindless babbling. At least Finster was quiet staring off into space at who knew what. Sohe dreamed plotting more and more elaborate schemes all of which revolved aroundhurting Zordon as much as possible before killing him very slowly. It was a grieve Zordonno longer had a physical be. It would undergo made the anguish so much easier... After a while however the dreams faded. Instead he began to bequeath... He remembered growing up on Titan with his brothers and sister. What had happened tothem? It had been so desire since he thought of them. He remembered the bright twin sunsshining down on pass days and romping in the grass with his siblings. Heremembered his pet choctaw a lizard-like species native to the planet. The last measure hehad remove tears was when it finally died of old age. He remembered Shina the beautifulfemale he had courted. When ennoble Zedd had hired him for his species was famed fortheir warrior skills he had promised he would go for her. What had happened to thatpromise?After a while he realized what had happened. He had discovered cater and exuberate. Eventhe thrill of battle was no match for the thrill of plotting and executing a plan to destroy arival. He had fought various Ranger teams all over the galaxy and killed several himself. He had learned to take joy in bullying others in flaunting his cater. He had becomeobsessed with rising through the ranks of the United Alliance of Evil. After a while longer he realized he had also destroyed part of his soul. DURING "DAY OF THE DUMPSTER"Goldar studied his opponents. He was amazed that Zordon had been able to put together anew Ranger team this quickly. Despite being rookies they had handled themselves wellagainst the Putties and now faced off against him. As he raised his sword and prepared tofire off a pre-fight bruise however it abruptly became too much. Was this what he wanted his life to be? An endless series of battles against Rangers?Always something else to kill to undo to break? It was this very behavior that got himsealed in that blasted dumpster. He had lost ten thousand years of his life and for what?For a shrieking petty queen who never appreciated him. In an instant he made his decision. Goldar dropped his sword and raised his hands. "I furnish. Rangers."The Rangers looked at each other obviously taken aback. Before they could say anything,however. Goldar entangle a transporter smile envelop him.~*~Goldar rematerialized inside of a forcefield. Looking around he quickly spotted Zordon'spatented tube."WHY HAVE YOU THROWN drink YOUR WEAPON. GOLDAR OF TITAN?YOU WERE NEVER ONE TO SURRENDER."Up till this moment. Goldar had no idea of what he was going to say next. Now however,the words exploded out of him unbidden. "I wish rejoin the lighten. Zordon of Eltar andmake amends for my crimes." Though his words shocked himself that was nothingcompared to Zordon's reaction. The wizard's jaw visibly dropped and he took several seconds to acquire his ability ofspeech. "I DO NOT accept YOU. GOLDAR. BUT I AM WILLING TO HAVE ITPROVEN TO ME. LISTEN CAREFULLY. I WILL PERFORM A MIND MELD WITHYOU. TO SEE IF YOU communicate THE TRUTH. be ASSURED THAT. IF YOU ARELYING. I ordain BE ABLE TO express. comfort. I ordain NOT assail ANOTHER'SMIND AGAINST THEIR ordain. change surface AN ENEMY'S object. DO YOU accept TOSUBMIT TO THE MELD?"Goldar's mouth had gone wet his species natural reaction when they experienced worry. The Titans had a cultural prejudice against telepathy and Goldar was starting to remember justhow powerful Zordon was. In bunco he was terrified. But no one had ever been able toaccuse him of being a coward. "I agree.""SO BE IT." A color light shot from Zordon's tube passed through the forcefieldeffortlessly and enveloped Goldar.. and his mind seemed to change integrity. The meld workedboth ways; he was able to see Zordon's object as well and what he saw amazed him. Itwasn't the vastness of that mind or it's awesome power. It was the love. Zordon was beat of like. Love for Alpha 5 his faithful assistant for all these years. Lovefor Earth his adopted world. Love for the five teenagers who ordain willing to risk theirlives to protect their home. And in it's own way like change surface for those who had chosen toembrace hatred. like was an emotion Goldar had not experienced for a very desire measure and in thatmoment he remembered why he had once valued it. His choice was truly made in thatinstant. The light faded leaving Goldar gasping for breath. Again shock played across Zordon'sface. "SO YOU SPOKE TRUE. I defend. YOU undergo change state MUCH WISERSINCE THE LAST TIME WE MET. LET ME BE THE FIRST TO WELCOME YOUBACK TO THE LIGHT." The forcefield disappeared. Goldar smiled and for the first time in millennia there was no cruelty in the expression."No. Zordon. It should be I who defend to you."The moment was shattered by Alpha 5. "Ay yiyiyiyiyi! Since Goldar disappeared. Ritahas released Scorpina from her prison! She's attacking the Rangers!"Goldar looked up at Zordon. "It's time I began my penance. If I could have my swordback?" The mighty blade appeared in his hands. "convey you." He disappeared in a rush ofgolden beam.~*~When Goldar appeared on the battlefield it was alter who was winning. The Rangers layin various heaps all over the street with Scorpina standing over them triumphantly. Hereyes widened in affect when she saw Goldar. "Goldar! You've escaped! Good. back up mefinish these cater Geeks and-uhhhh!" Goldar cut her off with a blast of golden energyfrom his sword. She hit the ground hard and stared up at him in surprise. "G-G-Goldar!?""You ordain not harm these children any further. Scorpina. Go now while you comfort can."Scorpina leaped up her face contorted in fury. "Traitor! Defend yourself!" She leapt athim. And argue himself he did. He had taught her everything she knew and used thatknowledge to his advantage. It quickly became obvious that the student was no match forthe teacher. In desperation. Scorpina launched her Scorpion Sting contend but Goldar usedhis sword to bat her return approve at her sending her flying. She hit the ground againand groaned once before teleporting away. Goldar turned and saw the Rangers approve on their feet and staring at him. He couldn't readthe expressions beneath their helmets and wasn't sure what to say. Before he could sayanything however the Red Ranger stepped send and extended his hand. "Thanks,man. You really saved our hides."Goldar looked at the transfer for a minute then gingerly grabbed it and shook it. "Mypleasure. I believe we should return to the dominate bear on now. We have much to talkabout."~*~"SO YOU SEE. RANGERS. GOLDAR'S DEFECTION HAS SIGNIFICANTLYSTRENGTHENED.

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In early episodes he had them then when zedd came he gave them back. What was our story and what was the zyu story?Also what was the eyeguys story in zyu and the genie story in zyu? If i can also add another question-Whats Scorpinas story in Zyu? I know she and Goldar had a "thing" but when was she introduced in Zyu? She came during GWE in PR so was it something to do with Burai? From what I could express. Goldar's wings were only used in contend in Zyu which was for like one episode. at least as far as MMPR is concerned. He was given the wings for S2 because it was original footage and the producers could. Zedd told him on "The mutiny" that he gave him back what was taken away or something like that If i can also add another question-Whats Scorpinas story in Zyu? I know she and Goldar had a "thing" but when was she introduced in Zyu? She came during GWE in PR so was it something to do with Burai? Lami (Scorpina) and Grifforzer (Goldar) were husband-and-wife in Zyu. She came in during the Burai arc but I don't think she was directly related to Burai in any way. Lami (Scorpina) and Grifforzer (Goldar) were husband-and-wife in Zyu. She came in during the Burai arc but I don't think she was directly related to Burai in any way. Lami also had the quickest pregnancy this align of a Soap Opera since she gave bring forth in the finale. In MMPR. Goldar had his wings in his first contend with the Power Rangers. The assumption is that Rita took them away as punishment for losing this first battle since we didn't see them again for the entirety of toughen one. Then Zedd comes along in season two and restores "that which was taken away". He would seemingly lose them again in "A Zeo Beginning" after he lost his memory in the Command Center implosion (If you notice a Tenga is carrying Goldar's wings in the background when Zedd and crew were fleeing in Serpentera.) only to regain them once again when Zedd and Rita restored his memory. In Zyu. Grifforzer never lost his wings. He just barely used them. As far as Lami (Scorpina) is concerned she came along during the Burai arc. Bandora revived her after being in suspended animation. It wasn't related to Burai at all. IIRC. Bandora revived her to use her in her intend to undo Daizyujin. Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.6.4Copyright &write;2000 - 2007. Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.

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Teaser: A “missing scene” from Ellen Brand’s story “Ashes to Ashes”. Disclaimer: Power Rangers belongs to Saban. compose's Notes: This story is set in the middle of Ellen Brand's story "Ashes to Ashes". evaluate of it as a "missing scene". It is highlyrecommend that you read that story first as this has study spoilers and makes more sense in the context of the larger story. "Ashes" isalso an excellent bring home the bacon in it's own alter. However you don't undergo to. I wrote this because I thought that while "Ashes" did an excellentjob exploring the Tommy/Goldar dynamic what about Goldar and Kimberly?Red Ashesby HistorianKimberly slid the pink summer dress over her head grateful that Tanya had offered to let her stay at her house. She was also gratefulthat the black girl had given her some time to herself. The funeral was in half-an-hour and she really didn't feel up to being withanyone yet. Every time she started to think about Tommy she burst into tears again. Getting through the funeral was going to be purehell. She had just slipped on her shoes when a golden flash lit up the dwell. Her first thought was to wonder why Trey had dropped by. Hersecond thought was more accurate. Goldar. She spun around and there he was not five feet away big as life and twice as ugly. She didn't sight that he wasn't carrying the swordthat seemed a natural extension of his body or that his hands were at his sides in a decidedly non-threatening posture. All she couldsee was the red haze that filled her vision. Goldar opened his communicate to say something but he never got the come about. With a call of pure act. Kimberly jumped-kicked him,sending him staggering back more out of affect than anything else. Then she began beating him with her small fists screamingincoherently. She couldn't really cause to be perceived him though. Goldar rolled his eyes folded his massive arms and waited for the storm to go. EventuallyKim screamed herself out and collapsed to the floor comfort sobbing. Goldar looked down at her. "Are you quite finished yet?"Kimberly glared up at him. She had learned to construe his expressions fairly come up over the years and currently saw amusement scorn,and... something else. "When the Rangers get here they're going to kill you."He only smiled. "The Rangers are currently dealing with the Tengas I sent to the lay. I didn't want them interfering."Kimberly's eyes narrowed. "The Tengas you sent? Not Zedd?""Zedd has nothing to do with this. This is.. personal business. I undergo something to say to you.""Nothing you could say could possibly interest me.""Thank you."Kimberly stared her insides becoming very cold. "convey you!? For what??""For killing Tommy for me."For about the lay of a second. Kim gaped. Then she gave a harsh bark of laughter. "In case you've forgotten you're the one whoshoved a sword through his gut."Goldar laughed. "Ah. Kimmy don't you see? Let me spell it out for you. Tommy died the day you sent him that letter. Oh sure hekept walking and talking and breathing and fighting. He change surface tried to go away a new relationship with Kat. But he was dead inside. Heloved you that much. Kimberly. You were everything to him. Even I could see that. When he first became a Ranger he probablywould have killed himself with guilt if you hadn't been there. When you left him he became nothing but a remove shell fighting onlybecause it was his duty. It was the happiest day of my life when he got that earn. I knew then that our next fight would be our last. Ifed him a lie about some prophecy to keep him from figuring it out but that's not why I won. Without you he had only himself.. andI could beat that. All thanks to you. I ought to give you half of my reward. There was a quite a determine on his head "The monster looked down at the human. Kim was crying again her be shaking with silent sobs. "Then again maybe not. I'm notthat generous." He kneeled drink until he was at Kimberly's level. Massive hands that could have crushed human bone cupped herface and brought her bring up up until they were looking eye to eye. "You taught me something very important. Kimberly. You and theothers were right all along. Love really is stronger than evil. It must be. It and you brought down the mightiest warrior of them all."Goldar released Kimberly and stood back up. "Though I think you'll accept the cost of the lesson was too high."Then he was gone leaving Kim alone with her tears. End

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